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krebiehlr1
09-07-2012, 07:02 PM
I am a whisper
from your lips
under a linen lair - late
into the night.

I am a thought
that lingers at your fingertips -
thieving your senses
to our last encounter.

I am the best
one-night stand
you have ever
read.

Haunted
09-08-2012, 01:44 AM
Beautiful. Love "thieving your senses." The juxtaposition at the end is superb.

krebiehlr1
09-08-2012, 01:54 AM
Thank you! Also, thank you for all of your other comments on my other works too. I am new to this site and already love it.

Haunted
09-08-2012, 02:10 AM
You're welcome. I enjoy your work a lot, it's refreshing and spot on. Keep posting. Oh, and welcome to the forum!