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E.A Rumfield
08-26-2012, 10:46 PM
Just think, somewhere in the world
a pretty girl is making a fart joke
or teasing a guy about his dick
a pacifist is committing murder
and the President of The United States
is being programmed by J.P Morgan
for tomorrows big speech

Somewhere, an African Lion recoils
in terror at the mere scent of a man
and who said animals were dumb
The sea turns a sickening shade of red
and in the sky a face can be seen staring
down at Earth
It's just a child looking into a snow globe
I wait till he begins to shake it

Hawkman
08-27-2012, 04:38 AM
You've a typo, (the first a) in S1 L3 and I'd cut the 'and' at the beginning of S2 L3. Incidentally, two ls in till, unless you include the apostrophe, ('til). This poem made me smile this morning. Those last two lines really work :)

Live and be well - H

E.A Rumfield
08-28-2012, 01:12 PM
Thanks.