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E.A Rumfield
08-26-2012, 07:51 PM
This is a song I wrote. Something simple. If I record it today I'll post the music. For know tell me what you think of the lyrics.


I have a bolo tie
and a ten gallon hat and
I'm goin really far and
I'm never comin back
to this town
to this town

I have a bolo tie
and my twelve string guitar
and I'm goin really far
where the ground is vast
and there's trees
oh yea trees

I got my head and
my two feet, that's all I need
and I'm goin really far
where the land is flat
and there are stars
in the sky

I have a bolo tie
and a ten gallon hat and
I'm goin really far
and I'm never comin back
to this town
to this town

I'm goin really far
and I'll be damned if I'd return
And I swear I won't miss the cars
swear I won't miss the malls
but maybe your voice
and your smell
and your hair, in your face
E.A Rumfield
08-26-2012, 10:22 PM
http://soundcloud.com/playingthepianodrunk/to-this-town
Jack of Hearts
08-27-2012, 01:53 PM
Pretty rough right now man. There's potential in there, but you got to work it out. This reader thinks your efforts will be fruitful, though, and if you keep posting it here then Jack of Hearts will keep checking it. For now.







J
E.A Rumfield
08-27-2012, 02:42 PM
Pretty rough right now man. There's potential in there, but you got to work it out. This reader thinks your efforts will be fruitful, though, and if you keep posting it here then Jack of Hearts will keep checking it. For now.







J

Yes. That was the first take. I've been working on the lyrics all day and I'm working on a new recording. I'll post as soon as I'm finished. Thanks for listening.
Pensive
09-04-2012, 03:02 PM
I'm goin really far
and I'll be damned if I'd return
And I swear I won't miss the cars
swear I won't miss the malls
but maybe your voice
and your smell
and your hair, in your face
I like it but I don't think it's so simple like you say as these lines actually brought tears in my eyes!
E.A Rumfield
09-04-2012, 03:53 PM
I like it but I don't think it's so simple like you say as these lines actually brought tears in my eyes!

Wow. Thank you. Your words brought a tear to my eye.