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miyako73
08-20-2012, 07:24 PM
I shall go
Where the thread flies
From its needle
To see the lark
Prune its wings,
To witness
The blossoming of lilies,
To cuddle the wind,
To blow the air
With a kiss.

I shall go
Where the horizon
Meets me halfway,
Where a dream
Is about hoping
To know where the end
Begins and goes,
Where the fireflies
Settle for the night,
Where I am mostly welcome.

Silas Thorne
08-20-2012, 08:13 PM
Great. Free flight, but never knowing what will arise. Interesting for me that you wrote 'the blossoming of lilies', since in Chinese culture anyway, lilies represent forgetting one's troubles.
A minor typo (or is it?) spoiled my first glance at it though: 'tread' . Should it be 'thread'?
Love the 'where I am mostly welcome' end.

miyako73
08-21-2012, 12:34 AM
Great. Free flight, but never knowing what will arise. Interesting for me that you wrote 'the blossoming of lilies', since in Chinese culture anyway, lilies represent forgetting one's troubles.
A minor typo (or is it?) spoiled my first glance at it though: 'tread' . Should it be 'thread'?
Love the 'where I am mostly welcome' end.

yes, you're right. Just changed it. thanks for reading.