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cacian
08-17-2012, 11:47 AM
Love is great
in times of faith
when heart to heart
eyes meet with grace
to catch a glance
and see through trance
a pulsive haste
that races fast
faster then sense
and beat a rate
to blissful pace

Love is a great
greater then race
it moves in ways
that catches phrase
make a day weighs
a pleasure gaze

Jerrybaldy
08-17-2012, 06:40 PM
aaah. you must be young or inspired. or both :D or either. or one or the other lol
JB

cacian
08-18-2012, 04:24 AM
Haha Jerrybaldy thank you for reading.

Heidy
08-18-2012, 08:03 AM
Wow, did u write it by yourself?!
WELL DONE :)

I like above all the end. Maybe love isn't so amazing because of love itself, but because it makes everything in your life joyful,colourful, sweeter.

Compliments again!!

Greetings from Italy :)

cacian
08-20-2012, 08:18 AM
Heidy thank you.