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Clayton
08-16-2012, 07:04 AM
Today, your day, was never mine
To choose or change or make.
But if there is some good to find
'Tis best for one to take.
Too few the days that do remain,
And this I have learned well,
Better to have told the things
You once thought not to tell.

Jeos
08-16-2012, 11:55 AM
Usually I'm against rhyme but this time I enjoyed it... it remembers me good poetry from another century in the past.

Clayton
08-17-2012, 05:19 AM
Thank you so much! It's the first poem I've ever posted in my life and you gave me my first compliment. By the way, Belgium looks awesome. I've only seen parts of it from the movie In Bruges, but it looks almost imaginary. Take care.

Jeos
08-17-2012, 12:52 PM
Thank you so much! It's the first poem I've ever posted in my life and you gave me my first compliment. By the way, Belgium looks awesome. I've only seen parts of it from the movie In Bruges, but it looks almost imaginary. Take care.


with pleasure dear fellow poet...me too I saw that film. It's true that the way it was filmed , the light,the "ambiance" makes it seductively strange. Some people say Belgium is somehow..."Kafkian" , (you know Franz Kafka...)