'Untitled'

[Jdub]

Prettiest face, perfect eyes,
I will never say goodbye.
Can't stand when your not near,
Need you more than a breath of fresh air.
My heart's been racing since the day we met,
I won't let you simply forget.
When you're here, my puzzle's complete,
Our hearts will never skip a beat.
Roses, fireworks, and even doves,
They all still can't explain my LOVE!

[louisgeorge]

awesome :hurray:

[Charles Darnay]

I was waiting for this to reach the height of cliché and then, in the second last line, there it was - the rose.

[Jack of Hearts]

How bitter, Chuckie D.

Jdub, much like Jack of Hearts' confused adolescence, you've expressed your love in an inappropriate forum. Go post in forum sectioned called 'Personal Poetry.'





J

[Silas Thorne]

Jdub, much like Jack of Hearts' confused adolescence, you've expressed your love in an inappropriate forum. Go post in forum sectioned called 'Personal Poetry.'





J

Yes, but maybe add some salt first and stir.