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cacian
08-12-2012, 08:40 AM
The tweets the fears
the weak the mere
and everything sheer
has meanings dear

The vower the goer
the abject the doer
and everything truer
has sentiments purer

The living the seeing
the real the surreal
and everything unreal
has proofs ethereal

The spoken
the written
the tell tale
the read for
is scripts to us all
from here and then on

MystyrMystyry
08-12-2012, 09:54 PM
Strange but true, Cacian. I like the real, unreal, surreal, ethereal stanza - that was a good stretch :)

Mutatis-Mutandis
08-12-2012, 10:08 PM
For someone who seems to have such a tenious grasp of the English language in discussions, your use of it in poetry is quite remarkable, cacian. Props, as the homies say.

cacian
08-13-2012, 04:35 AM
Thank you MystyrMystyr for reading and feedback.
Mutatis haha I know what you mean. I try and better it as much as I can.