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Jassy Melson
08-11-2012, 02:29 PM
Sitting inside a VW van
I saw my first snake of the year
tearing across the mountain road.
Now this was no slick snake in the grass,
this one was for real.

It was a brief encounter of reptile and man
for neither wanted to stick around
to explore or analyze;
that first summer serpent and I
just wanted to split the scene.

Looking back I noticed my black and blue
acquaintance--stretched--on the dirt road again.
Could it be that I interrupted a tan?
I marvel at such dust-swallowing will
and at the dusky-velvet hue of polished skin.

Today I saw the face of one
smothered still with ancient fears;
without hesitation we both fled.
And I don't know about my friend
but for me it was instinct.

Mutatis-Mutandis
08-11-2012, 06:44 PM
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Delta40
08-11-2012, 06:56 PM
I enjoyed the angle you gave the title Jassy, especially S2 & S4

Jassy Melson
08-11-2012, 07:34 PM
This poem is "true" in that it actually happened.

Delta40
08-11-2012, 07:37 PM
There is nothing like the happenings of everyday to inspire us in our writing!

Jassy Melson
08-12-2012, 05:11 PM
Subject matter for poems is all around us--and in our memory.

Delta40
08-12-2012, 05:27 PM
Although I think you're stating the obvious, I must remind myself that it might not be obvious to others and so I couldn't agree with you more. :D

AuntShecky
08-13-2012, 02:48 PM
I have the feeling I've read this and commented on this one before. Is this the first time you've posted it?

Jassy Melson
08-13-2012, 03:44 PM
As far as I can remember this is the first time I've posted it.

Delta40
08-13-2012, 05:25 PM
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67520N

I have alot of work too and that's why I tend to create on Lit-Net and then paste to my file.

AuntShecky
08-14-2012, 03:37 PM
Yep. Sometimes I really am in The Twilight Zone, but what a relief to know
that other times I'm not. Thanks, Delta.

http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showpost.php?p=1117870&postcount=2