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Delta40
08-10-2012, 05:41 PM
Let me bend
and sway,
play me
in slow rhythmic strum
and soft plucked notes
along the bridge of
my soul
as your slide
glides like the sound
of a lazy afternoon
and pure euphoria
gushes over your hands

Jerrybaldy
08-10-2012, 06:13 PM
Sensual sexual and wet and subtle(ish) :D

MystyrMystyry
08-11-2012, 07:00 PM
Musical Delta, with a twang and and a hammer, a plink and a trill! :)

Delta40
08-11-2012, 07:06 PM
Musical Delta, with a twang and and a hammer, a plink and a trill! :)

....and that's all before I start singing :D

Jerrybaldy
08-11-2012, 07:20 PM
everybody ****s off when you start singing :D

Delta40
08-11-2012, 07:33 PM
everybody f ucks off when you start singing :D

I wouldn't say everybody.... :hand:

Jerrybaldy
08-12-2012, 04:38 AM
tut tut :nono:

Delta40
08-12-2012, 05:41 AM
tut tut :nono:

Toto something tells me we're not in Kansas anymore. Is this anything to do with my poetry :blush:

AuntShecky
08-13-2012, 03:05 PM
They say a violin is like a woman. She sounds good, but only when you
tickle her strings the right way.

Delta40
08-13-2012, 05:42 PM
They say a violin is like a woman. She sounds good, but only when you
tickle her strings the right way.

:hand: Nobody is taking me seriously on this one!

Jeos
08-14-2012, 05:11 PM
Nobody is taking you serious...are you sure? Because it adjusts perfectly to
"I used to be a Feminist ©? But now I just shut up and take it "

Hhuum, just teasing you...nice poem indeed!

firefangled
08-15-2012, 11:18 PM
I take this very seriously, my lady. I had to wait a day before responding. :)

Seems this is woman as fretless guitar, played with a slide, which has two basic sounds: sad and sexy, sometimes together.

Here the latter is on her own. Love the description of the instrument.Very brief and very sexy. This was almost too blatent, but stop short of that, like a good player can stop a slide without a wobble.

Good job as usual, D

aliengirl
08-16-2012, 07:13 AM
Excellent poem. Seems like Delta is having a nice time. :)