A Venture Into The Obscure

[E.A Rumfield]

I see the wind
as it ravishes the land
Carrying with it
all that was great
and not so great
all that was beautiful
and all that was ugly
all my hopes
and your dreams

The rain falls, invisible,
and I watch it
wash the world away
the tide grows and, I
escape to higher ground as
the sky begins to
dissolve into the landscape
and the sun falls
right into the sea

The waves
they do the rest
and I'm standing
here on a smoldering
rock, with a cop and a clock
and neither ever did us any good

[Jeos]

Interesting interesting...even if rhythm's power decreases in the last stance.
But globally speaking it's of agreable reading (despite the content, which is rather realistic -unfortunately...)