Summer. Avenue Bernard

[PrinceMyshkin]

A woman with muscular legs.
A man with a sour look on his face.
The traffic rolls on.
The lowest branches of a plane tree
bow, as if in honour of the passersby.
Summer. Avenue Bernard. Montreal.

[Buh4Bee]

This is great! I love the visual of the dramatic plane tree branched bowing down.

[ampoule]

I love all of these poems like this, your observation poems I call them. It's like we are sitting right there together and you are mentioning this and that and I turn to look at what you've described.

[Buh4Bee]

I agree that it is as if you are sitting next to Prince on Avenue Bernard. What makes it so enjoyable is how "economically compact" it is. So much convey with so few words.