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crusoe
07-30-2012, 02:24 PM
Don't disturb the moth, don't upset the Fly.
Let the roach crawl in peace.
I raise my glass,
the one with fingerprints of all my years.

Candles, bring more candles
to lighten up this Midnight-Mess.
Is there still Water in the Tub ?
Heat it on the Hearth and
brew me something sweet,
to wrap around my icy heart.
Beware of pages drowned in wax
and go to bed, my Dear.

firefangled
07-30-2012, 06:24 PM
You and Miyako must live in the same haunted building, or drink the same sweet stuff.

I like some of the things implied here, like taking old bathwater out of the tub and reheating it-deliciously contributes to the tone of this, as is the unwashed glass.

You say a lot in this without saying it directly.