Boy, waiting.

[Jerrybaldy]

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[MystyrMystyry]

Still swingin' JB? Not bad at all especially considering the length - you sustained the interest throughout very skillfully.

Incidentally this and your previous make an interesting set of bookends to a biography in brief

[Bar22do]

Just as Jack has said - you got my attention through the whole piece. Enjoyed.

[Jeos]

For me the following S is the best one:

-"If I swing really high, will I leave this world
Like a boy, overboard?
Will I float, boy suspended,
as it cruises away?
Will Jane or maybe Sarah
see me for a second, a boy shaped speck in the sky?"

for the rest of the poem the bowstring is too soft...