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cacian
07-25-2012, 02:40 PM
the fact of life
is like a rhyme
it sides to side
and rides to ride
it drops in bounds
recall the rounds
signify a turn in counts
so you and I
can read the sounds

miyako73
07-25-2012, 03:10 PM
I don't know about "recall" and "signify". Is it about "it" or "bounds"? Or is it about the unwritten "You"? If the case is the latter, your non-usage of punctuation marks is problematic.