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Twota
07-17-2012, 12:16 PM
I open the eyes
so dark and dull,
I hear the wooden floor
as it moans beneath
my one legged mate,
I smell the dust
as it escapes
the three heavy feet
ascending the stairs,
I feel the peeled paint
underneath my fingers
falling off the wall,
I lie on the bed,
before I take off
my extra pair of eyes
and put my antenna
to rest,
I close the eyes
so dark and dull.

miyako73
07-17-2012, 12:35 PM
Nice one. I could read your state of mind.

Twota
07-25-2012, 10:02 AM
thanks miyako :D I have improved it now, I guess, I hope you like it more now! :D