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Delta40
07-15-2012, 08:56 AM
The board
laid across an old table
which echoes a language
you and I no longer speak.
We will never locate such words
in the Oxford to temper
the stale atmosphere.

Still, we thrash out our differences
with a game of scrabble.

You swear.
I savour the blank
even though our facial expressions
tell the same, worn story
over and over again
amidst the etchings
in the wooden table
of a bygone family life.

Why am I not surprised
by the ending?

The distance,
grown tired of letters
and meanings
just like the thinly disguised scores
shaped by sarcastic wit
and a cursory kiss,
grows by inches,
tile by tile.

Delta40
07-15-2012, 04:15 PM
removed and edited.

Jack of Hearts
07-15-2012, 04:30 PM
Domestic, sour, and the goddamn board game from hell. It mixes nicely in the airs of frustration.






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MystyrMystyry
07-15-2012, 07:02 PM
http://i1134.photobucket.com/albums/m605/mystyrmystyry/exdelt.png

kittypaws
07-16-2012, 12:53 AM
MystyrMystyry....very good job!

Delta...wouldn't it be nice if life was like a game board...you could put it away when you got tired of it....at least that is how I feel. I thought your poem was great! I understood it!

:thumbs_up
from Kittypaws

:)

ampoule
07-16-2012, 10:06 AM
Oh my. You have described millions of relationships. That stale atmosphere.....

I enjoyed your poem.

Delta40
07-16-2012, 11:03 AM
Thanks for the reviews. MM - nice touch!

Jeos
07-16-2012, 01:36 PM
The story is well told - nice poetic prose.

miyako73
07-17-2012, 01:06 PM
I love it. Plus fifty! Keep writing, Delta. It's definitely one of my favorites.

Delta40
07-17-2012, 05:16 PM
Thanks Miyako - a seven letter bonus!

Jerrybaldy
07-17-2012, 06:50 PM
Good job Delta. Now give the extended metaphore a rest and give us a Delta narrative :D

Delta40
07-17-2012, 07:05 PM
Good job Delta. Now give the extended metaphore a rest and give us a Delta narrative :D

What do you mean Jerry? Am I boring your pants off (are they ever on? :rofl:)

Bar22do
07-18-2012, 12:17 PM
This is - if possible - even more original than your others... where is the end, Delta, you're better and better, and you described here something so universal...

Delta40
07-18-2012, 06:14 PM
Thanks Bar. Perhaps there is a mixed opinion. I have felt so influenced by the poets I read lately.