Delta40
07-14-2012, 07:29 PM
How idiosyncratic to want her all the same. Another Jerry-esque poem with a touch of compulsive truth.
Jack of Hearts
07-15-2012, 12:12 AM
Such an odd brand of fury. Like the narrator's contempt has turned on himself but not short sighted the world either. The '(tomorrow, tomorrow)' evokes the showtune melody. This one is very well felt, the frustration, the anger, the hurt.
J
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