find you

[cacian]

Lavish!!! you beware
of emptyness and dare
adoration fares
when all has gone
to tern
towards the moon
and air
and yourself has
adjourned
upon thy soul
a lurk
lost lonely and bare
without the simplest
ware
that life
cordons him
and her
and everyone
that cares
and
you'd be
left for tare
without you
to declare


Hamish!! you revere
all around you is
stern
amass not
despair
consider self as
maire of
heart body and
stare
not towards the heavens
ahern
but sail amongst
the flaires
of intuition and
plur
to guide you
whilst you stir
to fields of
open worlds
beneath a cosmic
slur
of rays sunshines
and myrrh
to find you
and be found.

[MystyrMystyry]

Some clever wordplay going on here Cacian! Maybe a separate editor to review it for tightening some of the looser aspects, but still playful as it is :)

[cacian]

Some clever wordplay going on here Cacian! Maybe a separate editor to review it for tightening some of the looser aspects, but still playful as it is :)

MystyrMystyry I thank you for reading and feedback :smile5:

[Bar22do]

a scent of "retro," very enjoyable indeed! thank you!

[cacian]

a scent of "retro," very enjoyable indeed! thank you!

Bar22do I thank you for such a lovely feedback :)

[Jeos]

That's Poetry - with a great P.