Repetitions

[miyako73]

The blanket's floral red
Still dull and amaranth
After a long washing
Needs another cycle.

The landscape painting-
Limestone hills and trees-
Above the leather sofa
Has to be aligned again.

The blue porcelain plates,
Fake Ming made in China,
On the fired bamboo rack
Should all be rearranged.

The nouns, the idle verbs,
The discursive adjectives,
The unsure past participles
Call for a second revision.

[Delta40]

Like the heavy dullness that you manage to smear across the colourful imagery. So round and round we go like a Mayan calendar....