a heart to heart

[cacian]

as diamonds shine
sparkled a light
your eyes lit up
a view
a sight
another place
visual strikes
beauty beholds
it's tentalised
life ahead is,
breathless and rare
crimson to red
rivet a sigh
a sound upper
to middle high
and colours melt
to row and rise
a show of glory
fit for a time
where you and I
are kings of hearts

[Bar22do]

How about:

diamonds,
your eyes lit up a sight -
another life
tantalizing beauty
crimson to red
rivet a sigh
colours melt to row and rise
where you and I
are kings of hearts

this is, at least, how I see the moment better. feel free to use or toss! best to you!

[cacian]

How about:

diamonds,
your eyes lit up a sight -
another life
tantalizing beauty
crimson to red
rivet a sigh
colours melt to row and rise
where you and I
are kings of hearts

this is, at least, how I see the moment better. feel free to use or toss! best to you!


Hey Bar22do your version is fit haha!!
Thank you :biggrin5: