Taken...

[Little Gal]

It is like a clawing, creeping monster...
It doesn't bite just makes you uneasy...
and keeps you
while you go on living on the uneasiness thereafter.

[Jerrybaldy]

whilst you go on living, uneasy thereafter..as an alternative to the closing line maybe?. Felt that I knew what you meant Little Gal, although I didn't, but I prefer the quick bite to the dread that I think you wrote of.

[Little Gal]

whilst you go on living, uneasy thereafter..as an alternative to the closing line maybe?. Felt that I knew what you meant Little Gal, although I didn't, but I prefer the quick bite to the dread that I think you wrote of.

JB... long time... :D so happy to have you commenting.. guess u r right.. as always! thanks a ton.. :)

[Bar22do]

Gosh, your lines are few and the burden unbearable... I agree with Jerry, would give a lot for one clear bite rather than this... well said, Little Wave...

[Little Gal]

Gosh, your lines are few and the burden unbearable... I agree with Jerry, would give a lot for one clear bite rather than this... well said, Little Wave...

:D you make me feel better even when am jus drooping at d lowest! I just gotta go through ur comments! :) thanks so so much Bar..