fp563
06-24-2012, 02:04 PM
The Fair
Fair’s not fair for Fair alone,
has torn your eyes away from my own.
The fair, the stare are married at once without a care,
For the one unseen who is not there.
The pretty body that light will bear,
Shall turn my night into nightmare.
What- you from me, she’ll try and snare,
Her twisted heart, her breast is bare.
I wave, you leer, I scream, I fear,
My arms they flare, you do not care,
I’m scare-don’t dare be snared! Beware
- Her lair, the stare, the fair.
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Fair’s not fair for Fair alone,
has torn your eyes away from my own.
The fair, the stare are married at once without a care,
For the one unseen who is not there.
The pretty body that light will bear,
Shall turn my night into nightmare.
What- you from me, she’ll try and snare,
Her twisted heart, her breast is bare.
I wave, you leer, I scream, I fear,
My arms they flare, you do not care,
I’m scare-don’t dare be snared! Beware
- Her lair, the stare, the fair.
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Hi, I would love feedback however harsh, it's been really helpful in the past! Thanks
xxx