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whitman
06-10-2012, 04:59 AM
Tadas
hallaig
06-10-2012, 05:27 AM
Nicely achieved sonnet. rain enraptured eyes and wind walzed wings a bit rich for my taste, though.
Bar22do
06-10-2012, 05:39 AM
Love your sonnet (and admire craft, I could not write a form poem, alas). It has an old-fashioned scent but it's nice to read. Thank you!
Jack of Hearts
06-10-2012, 03:00 PM
Yech for form, but yay that you did as well as you did wiyh it. This reader encourages you to share one with no strict form... Personal taste kind of thing.







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