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cacian
05-31-2012, 10:20 AM
a river runs through
a passage of time
an echo afar
catches the dark
as nightfall approaches

a moment of rapture
divulges in dimensions
a reason to be
triggers affection
as desire unfolds

a minute of silence
lapses an action
a beat off a track
elances to strike
a perfect emotion

a river runs through
a sentiment true
and a current of light
catches the air
as darkness unveils

ahsiam
05-31-2012, 01:34 PM
made me feel like i am lost in a dark forest trying to find my inner self..

"elances to strike
a perfect emotion"

wonderful lines..

cacian
06-01-2012, 04:53 AM
Thank you ahsiam for reading and feedback glad you enjoyed this piece.