Mojtaba-Iraqi
05-30-2012, 09:53 AM
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The Legend of Life
Among the cures of immortals, there I found
Opium for those, who come, live and laugh
“You can be immortalized”
A legend from the gargling mind of Time
And darkness, tattered imagination and waving mirage
---
Among the curses of immortals, there I found loneliness
Singing the melancholy rhyme
Leaving behind the cherished dreams
Childhood, innocence and arms of a dear brother
---
Among the norm of immortals, there I found revelation
That no beloved stay forever
I shall not forgive the gods
Who granted me with loneliness
And tears in motionless sunset
---
Among the despair of immortals, there I found the spell
Of sorrow, casted by yearning
In the shipwreck of Time
Without a surviving joy
But calm splutters of forgotten dreams
“Farewell”
---
I wish, I was not immortal
To stay with him, hugging in warmth
The Legend of Life
Among the cures of immortals, there I found
Opium for those, who come, live and laugh
“You can be immortalized”
A legend from the gargling mind of Time
And darkness, tattered imagination and waving mirage
---
Among the curses of immortals, there I found loneliness
Singing the melancholy rhyme
Leaving behind the cherished dreams
Childhood, innocence and arms of a dear brother
---
Among the norm of immortals, there I found revelation
That no beloved stay forever
I shall not forgive the gods
Who granted me with loneliness
And tears in motionless sunset
---
Among the despair of immortals, there I found the spell
Of sorrow, casted by yearning
In the shipwreck of Time
Without a surviving joy
But calm splutters of forgotten dreams
“Farewell”
---
I wish, I was not immortal
To stay with him, hugging in warmth