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PrinceMyshkin
05-28-2012, 12:47 PM
A spider drops
from a web
slung across the corner
of a basement room,
and scurries away.

Hawkman
05-28-2012, 01:04 PM
I had to do an internet search in order to understand this, but having done so, this fragment has an apposite, eerie emptiness. Very effective.

Live and be well - H

PrinceMyshkin
05-28-2012, 04:33 PM
I had to do an internet search in order to understand this, but having done so, this fragment has an apposite, eerie emptiness. Very effective.

Live and be well - H

I deeply appreciate this. It came about after I heard about the apprehension of the alleged self-confessed murderer. I needed to write something to vent my sadness and outrage, but it pretty quickly came to me that any effort I made to imagine and attempt to represent the actual event would be an obscene presumption. What I've presented is as close as I could get to the moment of that poor child's death.

Jack of Hearts
05-28-2012, 05:17 PM
Yeah, wow. Gotta agree with Hawk. Nicely done Prince. This is deeply unsettling.






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