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Jerrybaldy
05-25-2012, 06:22 PM
Its all too beautiful
To mean nothing
Erectile tissue
Pre come
The angels that flap their wings
As your labia
Blossom
The spermatazoa
Unswallowed
That will make little Charlie
And make us whole
Its all too beautiful
Pass me tissues
I love yous
Only the gods up above
Could have gave us so much love
Turn me on
Tell me how you masturbated
Your fingers
Were the holy ghost
Come walk with me in daffodils
Lets screw amidst the yellow
There is more to life
The poet writing you words
The artist painting your pastels
The office creep
Massaging your ego
They all want to do you
It’s a great sunset
I could sell tickets
Gods are dead
It’s a lonely rock
Ruled by
some f uckers c ock.

miyako73
05-25-2012, 06:32 PM
You are so inspired lately, Jerry. Words come out like overflowing spits. Very spirited. Even the sexual words do not come out vulgar. I love it. It seems you're free and you don't give a fvck. Indeed, a felt, unrestricted poem.

I keep on re-reading your stuff hoping I'll get my poetic groove back. Thanks again.

Twota
05-25-2012, 06:35 PM
Nice one jerry, very clever. :D

Buh4Bee
05-25-2012, 08:30 PM
Let's go! I'll leave you speechless! Just kidding, it's the Friday night Vodka! Someone may accuse me of being unfaithful! But still, you have to come to America for this plane ride. You can fly home without your pants. Shhhh!

Silas Thorne
05-25-2012, 09:05 PM
Excellent! Such a bloody honest poem. I like this. No pissing about. I love the conflict with the stated position of 'It's all too beautiful to mean nothing' in the poem.

Jack of Hearts
05-25-2012, 09:13 PM
Let's go! I'll leave you speechless! Just kidding, it's the Friday night Vodka! Someone may accuse me of being unfaithful! But still, you have to come to America for this plane ride. You can fly home without your pants. Shhhh!

Good lord, Baldy, you have a groupie!

Agreed with Silas.

Favorite lines:


It’s a great sunset
I could sell tickets



J

Delta40
05-25-2012, 09:31 PM
Let's go! I'll leave you speechless! Just kidding, it's the Friday night Vodka! Someone may accuse me of being unfaithful! But still, you have to come to America for this plane ride. You can fly home without your pants. Shhhh!

Aww get lost biarch! I was his groupie first ok? :boxing_smiley: :biggrin5: