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miyako73
05-25-2012, 06:59 AM
eye
dew
knot
here;
eye
sea.

miyako73
05-25-2012, 06:15 PM
I'm not being arrogant with this one. It took me all night to conceptualize.

This is a deconstructed poem from this:

............. eye(s)
............. dew
............. knot
............. here (in my belly)
............. eye(s)
(to the) sea

It is deconstructed to sound "I do not hear; I see--the sound of discontent.

Twota
05-25-2012, 06:18 PM
hahahaha, finally got it. :D