Echoes

[miyako73]

It is not the same without you
Without you in my bed at night
At night when I am alone now
Alone now because you left...

[Delta40]

Good play with words from each line Miyako which leaves an opening for the unspoken line, 'You left' on our lips.

[PrinceMyshkin]

This seems so simplistic at first but there's a haunting quality to it. I would read it and then I'd read it again, and it felt like the first time.

[miyako73]

That's how I felt too. Thanks, Prince.