you be

[cacian]

it's the little things you are
that makes this world
go round in twos
and puts you right ahead of you
in light in bright in moments due
where everything evolve with you
no matter what else is in view

it's the simplest words you paint
that brings you closer to
a lieu
where prose and sentiments are
dieu
and laughter mesmerise of you
with promises of something beau
no matter what you say or do

it's the purest thoughts you
draw
out of your deepest enclos
that guides you right through
your envoys
of days
of times
of bestest fines
that let you be yourself in flow
amongst your perfect feelings
crew

[MorpheusSandman]

It's a lovely sentiment, but you have to watch out for using too many of the same rhyme sound in the piece or else it can become more like a joke than an actual poem. There is a point (though debatable where it's at) that rhyme sounds go from being musical to gratingly monotonous.

[cacian]

thank you Morpheus for the feedback and reading!!