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ShadowsCool
05-02-2012, 07:37 AM
Bathing Beauty
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No thought could contain her,
Her enormity not defined;
When she was brought to this life,
It was to fill a part of being sublime.

And if two eyes could at once meet,
Mine would be held inside a dream;
The day I could look up and see,
Ravishingly her looking over me.

For she had a radiance not unlike the sun,
And a wonderment unmatched by an eclipse;
As restless she was like a vessel tossed by the sea,
A lady who woke the moon as bathing beauty.

BienvenuJDC
05-02-2012, 08:57 AM
I like it. But maybe that just because I'm currently in love, and it made me think of her.

ShadowsCool
05-02-2012, 01:41 PM
I like it. But maybe that just because I'm currently in love, and it made me think of her.

That's a good thing. Yeah it's a fluff piece that I tend to write. I'm glad you're in love. Can't beat the feeling.

fp563
05-02-2012, 07:12 PM
I love to meet other Classicists!
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bathsheba_at_Her_Bath