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miyako73
05-02-2012, 06:01 AM
My metaphors,
My deep words,
Are now gone.

Colored Images
Fade into blurs
to become grey.

Audible syllables
Lose their rhythm
And become sighs.

Bare and empty
Under my blanket,
I suffocate myself.

Buh4Bee
05-02-2012, 06:27 AM
Miyako- This is a nicely controlled poem. I am never crazy about the topic.