Waiting

[kittypaws]

She sits upon the shore line
Waiting for an answer
Her heart beats faster
She adores her lover
And wants nothing more or less
Then simple relief and happiness
A smile of success
To give him a sigh of breath.

kittypaws

[MystyrMystyry]

Ah Kitty - one day her prince will arrive in a golden barge, riding a winged white horse to carry her back to his palace. Always happens like that ;)

[kittypaws]

Ah Kitty - one day her prince will arrive in a golden barge, riding a winged white horse to carry her back to his palace. Always happens like that ;)

Thanks Mystyr....but it is the other way around. But I must say I do like the winged white horse to ride. Will you be the prince????? :blush:

And thank you for your reply....hugz!

kittypaws

[MorpheusSandman]

A very sweet, simple, lyrical piece, kittypaws. It has echoes of Robert Browning's Meeting at Night, though perhaps from the other perspective.

[michaelsbearre]

She sits upon the shore line
Waiting for an answer
Her heart beats faster
She adores her lover
And wants nothing more or less
Then simple relief and happiness
A smile of success
To give him a sigh of breath.

kittypaws
Great READ!