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MystyrMystyry
04-24-2012, 09:36 PM
Sore

Hungry

Tired

Hot

Find a carwash on a roof
And of course ride through
Which solves the final
The leathers shrink tight
Bondaged into body bandage
Straightjacketed unbalanced
So we skid out to the edge
Stopping precarious second
Teetering over the precipice
Fall asleep from the anxiety
Which solves the next up
Suddenly flying - no - falling!
Through the supermarket roof
Food everywhere, and free
Which should solve second
But salami skin won't peel
The fruit is plastic and wax
No tin opener to be found

And the soreness returns

qimissung
04-24-2012, 11:25 PM
I l-u-r-v-e it, MystyrMystyry! It makes you feel like your'e in the middle of a Marx Bros. movie! How inventive!

MystyrMystyry
04-25-2012, 05:30 PM
Thankyou Qimi! :)

cogs
04-25-2012, 11:21 PM
this seems like a pretty fatigued dreamer. lol it took me a little bit to associate the first words with the numbers. this was intriguing and interesting to piece together.

MystyrMystyry
04-30-2012, 09:48 PM
Thanks Cogs :)