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ShadowsCool
04-22-2012, 07:10 PM
A Blooming Blue Rose

Their lips first time met
As a cosmic wave
Swept over the sea of tranquility

Awakening their eyes
To a blooming blue rose
Having fell from the sky

As petals on their hearts
Gathered from the divine
Holding the flame of fate like stars

Twinkling for each others presence
Swooned by what they saw.

cogs
04-22-2012, 07:37 PM
i like how the parallels in this convey a magical, romantic ecstacy.

Buh4Bee
04-22-2012, 08:00 PM
This is gorgeous! I love the idea of a blue rose instead of a red one. To me there is an irony in the meeting of these two lovers for the first time. Although it is a joyful event, there is an implication of a sadness or blueness. I could be completely off, but I still like to let the imagination go sometimes.

ShadowsCool
04-23-2012, 06:39 PM
Yes, an irony that all love affairs start out steamy but most end in steam.

Buh4Bee
04-23-2012, 08:38 PM
Haha! So very true!