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organizedchaos
04-17-2012, 09:24 AM
Your hands run over my hip bones and
this time, instead of bracing myself
for selfish expectation
I actually let myself melt into your love.
My stomach and inner thighs soften,
my heart beat melodically slows down,
and my eye lids fall ever so gently over my gaze.
I finally let you have me.

Alexander III
04-17-2012, 11:40 AM
On the whole i found this poem to be missing alot, it seems too cliche almost like a pop song on the radio, also the fact that it seems completley unedited does not work in its favor.