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David Strugnell
04-13-2012, 06:03 AM
dole

you are required to keep a
log i and electronic mail
intertwined almost married ray
of commitment shines know i shall

offer the sword of diligence
moving the mouse refined expert
and knowing a coincidence
pinpoints the outstanding suspect

i have three codes and play demon
my eyes are red politics blue
i am mind and hope and motion
see situation shining through

yes coincidence i needed
to say barrsta by water
lord honeymanscott he pleaded
from the grave i say a daughter

wants ny fan david studying
a foreign word there for waiter
he pretends he is relaxing
for his money he a talker

David Strugnell
04-13-2012, 06:21 AM
dole
revision

you are required to keep a
log i and electronic mail
intertwined almost married ray
of commitment shines know i shall

offer the sword of diligence
moving the mouse refined expert
and knowing a coincidence
pinpoints the outstanding suspect

i have three codes and play demon
my eyes are red politics blue
i am mind and hope and motion
see situation shining through

yes coincidence i needed
to say barista by water
lord honeymanscott he pleaded
from the grave i say a daughter

wants ny fan david studying
a foreign word there for tender
he pretends he is relaxing
for his money he a talker

ShadowsCool
04-13-2012, 02:03 PM
Please abide by the forum rules of 1 poem per day. It's not fair to the rest of us.

Regards

PrinceMyshkin
04-13-2012, 02:37 PM
The oriental characters in your signature lead me to wonder if your usual language is something other than English because none of your poems make sense.

David Strugnell
04-14-2012, 05:06 AM
I think they're fine.