dole

[David Strugnell]

dole

you are required to keep a
log i and electronic mail
intertwined almost married ray
of commitment shines know i shall

offer the sword of diligence
moving the mouse refined expert
and knowing a coincidence
pinpoints the outstanding suspect

i have three codes and play demon
my eyes are red politics blue
i am mind and hope and motion
see situation shining through

yes coincidence i needed
to say barrsta by water
lord honeymanscott he pleaded
from the grave i say a daughter

wants ny fan david studying
a foreign word there for waiter
he pretends he is relaxing
for his money he a talker

[David Strugnell]

dole
revision

you are required to keep a
log i and electronic mail
intertwined almost married ray
of commitment shines know i shall

offer the sword of diligence
moving the mouse refined expert
and knowing a coincidence
pinpoints the outstanding suspect

i have three codes and play demon
my eyes are red politics blue
i am mind and hope and motion
see situation shining through

yes coincidence i needed
to say barista by water
lord honeymanscott he pleaded
from the grave i say a daughter

wants ny fan david studying
a foreign word there for tender
he pretends he is relaxing
for his money he a talker

[ShadowsCool]

Please abide by the forum rules of 1 poem per day. It's not fair to the rest of us.

Regards

[PrinceMyshkin]

The oriental characters in your signature lead me to wonder if your usual language is something other than English because none of your poems make sense.

[David Strugnell]

I think they're fine.