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the facade
04-10-2012, 07:12 AM
Psychiatric Whores

Psychiatric whores
tinkle my course
of coarse grass
that is my path.

Under the arches
of their spreading legs,
I them wet
and in my stead -

Postulating,
urinating,
pisstulating,

they extend
their life lessons
that greens my grasses.

So I always know
to ask for more
thanks to
the psychiatric whore.

DocHeart
04-10-2012, 01:40 PM
This has elements I enjoy more than I should. It's not so much the subject matter (or the multitude of things it might symbolize), but the more than decently conveyed surrealist tone. I'm not supposed to like surrealism. I'm 40 now.

Good to meet you.

DH

the facade
04-13-2012, 01:22 PM
Thank you for the kinds words!