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serveitup61
04-09-2012, 01:13 PM
I lost.
Released my grip,
And now she’s gone.

Now what?
I can’t call,
But I can’t keep going.

The thought,
Of her voice hurts,
Like a fire you can’t stop.

I lost.
Let her run off,
Into the dark blue night.

I wrote a poem.
Yet I still lost.

Mutatis-Mutandis
04-09-2012, 01:19 PM
You're right, it does.

(sorry, but you kind of set that comment up)

jajdude
04-10-2012, 04:00 AM
The title made me wanna see though.