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Delta40
04-07-2012, 11:40 AM
She turned another corner
leaving yesterday behind,
along with her purse on the bus.
A plastic stiletto
that never quite fit
left a trail of sparkling sequins
on the way to Lost & Found.

DocHeart
04-07-2012, 12:21 PM
She turned another corner
leaving yesterday behind,
along with her purse on the bus.
A plastic stiletto
that never quite fit
left a trail of sparkling sequins
on the way to Lost & Found.




I really enjoyed the rhythm in the middle there. Tararam-tararam-tararam-taram, a plastic stilletto that never quite fit -- splendid.

But is the mysterious woman with the magic shoes nostalgic for the past she abandoned on the bus? Or is she heading to L&F to see if an old version of herself may still be found there? Whichever the case, we wish her luck.

Thanks for sharing, Delta!

DH

ShadowsCool
04-07-2012, 12:53 PM
Nice work Delta

Delta40
04-07-2012, 08:23 PM
Thanks guys