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ShadowsCool
04-06-2012, 11:45 PM
~Love Poem 65 (Severus)~

Kiss me beneath the milky twilight
Lead me out on the moonlit floor
Lift your open hand.
Strike up the band and make the fireflies
Dance silver moon’s sparkling, so kiss me

And never let me go,
This magic I may never know again.
For if the stars in your eyes fade
Where would I then find you?
Beneath the overburden moon,
Me lonely looking for you!

So kiss me above the twilight sea,
Lead me on to your fantasy
With me leading your hand
To a love land of stars and fireflies,
Above us in a love that never dies.

Special thanks to Alexandra who wrote the first stanza and I got inspired so I wrote the rest.
. .

Love Poem 66

In the short burst of light
Each, the eye met
Each, the nose breathe
The breath of fondness.

So that they believe
They made a pact
That whosoever's eye leaves
They would leave too.

And on them the eyes of love fell
Each, the eye of beauty
Each, the breath of perfume
That all in this journey should dwell.

. . .

Love Poem 67

Let us go Charlotte
Observe the stars,
I forgot to look up
Seeing in them who you are.

Let us go
Then you will see,
I forget even your name
For it means nothing above.

That you find
I never asked your name,
It was given from everlasting
I can't recall.

But I know you as Charlotte
Though it could be any name,
A star, a stone, even an odd phrase
Matters little when you find love.

Jack of Hearts
04-07-2012, 01:14 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G5CWKxKMcLA


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BookBeauty
04-07-2012, 06:27 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G5CWKxKMcLA


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Perhaps it's an insane coincidence.

Buh4Bee
04-07-2012, 06:52 AM
Perhaps? Good song...

ShadowsCool
04-07-2012, 07:42 AM
Perhaps? Good song...

Hahaha, wow, I feel like a fool because a certain girl wrote these very lyrics on her facebook page. I asked her if I can use them, thinking they were her's (a stanza that inspired me) Now I know LOL. Thanks for pointing that out guys. At least it was done in innocence. If you read right after the poem, I write "Special thanks to Alexandra who wrote the first stanza and I got inspired so I wrote the rest".

I think it's insane. I thought it was a trite lyric anyway. But it seemed like fun trying to finish something someone started. I better obliterate the first stanza or risk being sued. Ah, always check your sources. I should have known, being that she is so young and I never even heard the song.

I will add another in its place.

Shadows


~Love Poem 64~

As we join our bodies,
Our secrets fit together
Like lego's that snap into place.

My arm is just an extension of your arm.
When you scratch I feel,
When you smile, I crumble and blush.

My imagination runs soft across your belly,
Down through the curves of your thighs;
Where I stop and look in your eyes.

My lips are just half of your lips;
They need each other,
Like the bloom of the rose
Admired by the butterfly.

As we stroll on our secluded beach,
Your nose just breaths in the salty sea air
Of love, wonderful love.
And your eyes become an opening to my eyes,
As we walk through
A transfiguration of light
Crossing the wet tears of bliss;
You and I so the angels can sigh.

BookBeauty
04-07-2012, 08:15 AM
I had a feeling that it was an innocent mistake. :) Could happen to anyone.

Nice work, by the way.

ShadowsCool
04-07-2012, 12:53 PM
I had a feeling that it was an innocent mistake. :) Could happen to anyone.

Nice work, by the way.

Thanks. Actually it read kinda odd, like a lyric but I got inspired. No harm done.

Buh4Bee
04-08-2012, 07:38 AM
I agree, its not great writing for a poem, but its still a fun song. They are "pop" lyrics.

ShadowsCool
04-08-2012, 07:50 AM
I agree, its not great writing for a poem, but its still a fun song. They are "pop" lyrics.

Next someone will send me the lyrics to

Yesterday
All my troubles seemed so far away...

Ah, :redface: