Colour Me...

[Little Gal]

Colour me true
Colour me new
Colour me away from me
Colour me in you

Colour me light
Colour me bright
Colour me in fresh breathes
In every small happiness

Colour me still
Colour me in shine
Colour me within me
And make your colours mine

[cacian]

cute poem Little Gal I enjoyed this one.

[Little Gal]

hehe.. well I thank you..
honestly I was not expecting anything but harsh criticism...
I think this one is rather silly..but since am back after a long break, I kind of thought of beginning with this little poem I had written a long time ago...
feeling tired of complexity and sophistication.. lol
:D

[tylerdf]

i like this a lot.
thanks for sharing!

[Little Gal]

i like this a lot.
thanks for sharing!

thanks a lot.. :)
and you are welcome! :D