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cacian
03-25-2012, 09:30 AM
amidst the angst that steer
the reasons are up straight
they trail a sense of fate
over a dress of tale
that is one size too see-through
no matter what the cut

amidst the reasons why
there is a tense that bends
it weaves its ways up streams
across the meanings fast
allowing to strike real
against a fake that's rid

amidst the simplest ways
along comes a plurr quaint
it rearranges says
accord to upgrade phase
it lessens feelings lows
and fasten motions high
off strains
it let the sultry go
never to return forth

amidst the joie de vivre
laughters are reigning queens
and kings are sounds of ries
they compliment in deals
a parternship of steel
nothing to shake to slim
doubting their power seals
everything to their means
making them symbol dreams

Bar22do
03-26-2012, 06:23 AM
This, cacian -

... they trail a sense of fate
over a dress of tale
that is one size too see-through
no matter what the cut

is a very well worded!

Always enjoy your verse and thank you.