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whoops, accidentally four poemed...

[qimissung]

I like the first one best, Jack. I think what you say in the first three stanzas builds to a climax in the fourth-all that patiently waiting and sadness.

[Jerrybaldy]

Jack oh Jack. One at a time. I am with Qim in liking the first one best but have to say that S2 confused the flying **** out of me. always a pleasure Jack.

[Charles Darnay]

I agree with both of the above, the first is incredible. I also really like the fourth.