The Paradise

[Tashkeelahmed]

Far from this universe
there exists another world
gleaming like gold
blessed as ‘told’
the land of eternal pleasure
more like a hidden treasure
a Utopia for which we all quest
reserved only for the best
who in this world abstain
from the things that inflict pain
to the soul of mankind
and surely they’ll be bestowed
in days to come with the very world
lies far from this universe
with this I pray to Almighty
that I might be among ye
on the day of resurrection
when all remain busy in supplication
may I be blessed
with the world that is the best!

[Charles Darnay]

Rhyming poetry can work, but this does not. It reads as though you were more concerned with rhyming than giving any meaning to the lines.