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cacian
03-13-2012, 09:55 AM
in a will to make
a life stroll fast
you must abondon
all your frusts
to give yourself
the right time pulse

in a trial to beat
the grimest fault
you must intend
to steer from tense
to please your mind
with something grace

in a moment to
state all claims
you try to muse
someone, a face
the resonance you get
from lates
are signifyers of your faith

in a manner to
reach a deal
you stride aforth
before all else
you track a fact
against a tact
and your winnings
are striking mines

Bar22do
03-13-2012, 03:59 PM
cacian, I do not always comment but always read your poems with great interest and like how you pave the young roads of life: with honesty, friendship, true courage. Kudos from the bottom of my (a bit older :wink5: !) heart!

cacian
03-14-2012, 06:41 AM
cacian, I do not always comment but always read your poems with great interest and like how you pave the young roads of life: with honesty, friendship, true courage. Kudos from the bottom of my (a bit older :wink5: !) heart!

Bar22do I thank you for reading!!
your feedback is always much cherished and enjoyed :)