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Hoby
03-13-2012, 03:11 AM
Face your problems with a smile

Stop being anxious and think for a while

If you face your problems with tension, nothing will change

Think deeply to solve them and imagine they are not strange

Even the toughest problems can be solved in an easy way

Calm down; be patient and persistent as life is grey

It doesn't give the person all what he dreams

This is the nature of life and that's how it seems

CanadianKid
03-13-2012, 03:28 AM
Bravo, I quite enjoy your sense of sound. Reading the poem aloud, I find myself really appreciating the re-occurring 'p' sounds.

Kingbob
03-15-2012, 09:33 AM
I like your structure,the whole and some certain sentences. How optimistic U are!Yeah,life is tough,but we can change it if we are optimistic and confident enough.