I loved you on purpose

[organizedchaos]

My heart beat is not a mistake
And the way the birds
fly together is a design.
I'm simple because I seek simplicity
I'm passionate because I let my heart move me
And I'm sensitive because I give myself permission to cry
My tears are not a mistake
I loved you on purpose.

[qimissung]

I love the ideas that are rolling around like marbles on a floor. You didn't say too much or too little, but just enough. A pleasure.

[Pensive]

Every line of your poem is a whole poem in itself! Melikes. :D

[phoenixtears]

Wow! The simple words in that poem are spilling magic. The last two lines completely mesmerised me.

[Buh4Bee]

This is a beautiful poem.

[Jerrybaldy]

no mistake. it is great.

[Varenne Rodin]

That's very sweetly put. Nice work. :)

[Mutie]

beautiful, quotable

[Scheherazade]

Simple and sweet.

Techinically speaking, I am not sure whether lines 5 and 6 work go well with the rest of the poem, however.

[Calidore]

Very nice. Even after reading the whole thing, lines 2 and 3 kind of take me out, but the last two lines are perfect.

[organizedchaos]

Thank you everyone!