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MystyrMystyry
03-06-2012, 07:02 PM
Steep trail
Twelve poised
Horn honks
We're off
Chicane tussel
Mike slides
Tires slip
John collides
Loses grip
Tangle right
Olly flies
Tight turn
Gravel pit
Dave's gone
Over edge
Pete's brakes!
Rocks ahead
Tough luck
Wet shale
Gaz tumbles
Into space
Bob veers
Hardwood tree
Yelps loud
Crushes knee
Sharp crag
Loose dirt
Rick skids
Side swipes

Me


Sore arse

Oh well

Bar22do
03-06-2012, 07:20 PM
"me" should be Me for consistence sake, apart from which I can't decide if it's bikes or cars' collision (not very serious it seems); heal your sore arse, Mystyr, on it you sit when composing! it's precious!

MystyrMystyry
03-06-2012, 08:34 PM
Thanks Bar22do :)

Yes, 'Me'

It's an unorthodox mountain bike race, which is great fun but tough going because you start on a too-narrow track altogether (rather than just being timed individually), and anything goes. It's a bit biking, a bit roller derby, a bit kick boxing, and a bit Death Race 2000 with moving obstacles ;)

Jerrybaldy
03-07-2012, 09:53 AM
I was thinking bikes due to the sore arse :) great fun MM, amazing what you have painted here in two word lines.

MystyrMystyry
03-08-2012, 01:42 AM
Thanks JB :)

Glad you got a kick out of it